Burning

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  • Hate
    • Scorpia
    • trust everyone, get hurt...trust no one, get nothing

    Burning
    Hate is burning in my heart.
    Rage is flowing in my veins.
    Suddenly I slash out, with fury,
    like e big cat.
    I screech and howl, madly,
    like a cat.
    Whether
    I fight and win,
    or I fight and lose,
    hate will always be there,
    burning.

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    Crush commented on Burning

    07-17-2009

    wow, are you really 11 ? this is some wonderful and intense writing for an 11 year old. good job. "...like a big cat ....."
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    Scorpia

    07/18/2009

    well, im almost 12

    kittman101 commented on Burning

    07-16-2009

    this reminds me of a lady ninja fighting in a tournament. I see two ninjas fighting, or students of martial arts. I love the imagery which fills my mind.
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    terrellharrisjr commented on Burning

    05-16-2009

    Envokes strong emotions in the person reading it. Nice job.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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