BUSTED RHYMES

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    just a thought - if writing were truly an offense of the law

    BUSTED RHYMES
    My pen is my weapon, these lines are my crime
    I have created another sorrow-filled rhyme
    So Judge tell me how much time will I serve
    I hope it's not much more than I deserve
    I have confessed my sins in a sullen prose
    so pass down the sentence that you'll impose
    Gone is the pain, over the love I lost
    Just tell me now, what will be the cost?
    I have already given up all that I hold dear
    Nothing remains inside me not even a tear
    Be it torture or death - I can take it all
    Whatever the punishment Judge, it is your call!

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    ShadowEyes commented on BUSTED RHYMES

    12-22-2011

    Another thing, I like the title lol. Buster rhymes... made me think of busta rhymes lol
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    ShadowEyes commented on BUSTED RHYMES

    12-22-2011

    Very nicely written. Keep up the good work... wonderful!!! :-)
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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