By the Wind

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  • Imagination
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  • Fantasy

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    This is my first poem where I looked at a picture to make a poem. Notice each line in the poem has six syllables in hopes to make it an even flow.

    By the Wind

    Not troubled by sadness
    Not swayed by angry crowds
    White mountain tips below
    Above the sullen clouds

    Crowned king of his voyage
    Unfolded wings can fly
    Feeling as a monarch
    He reigns over blue sky

    As an eagle soaring
    Worlds to unveil in flight
    On wings given by God
    Free to climb to new heights

    Spirit drifting higher
    Ocean breeze flows through him
    Gliding above heaven
    His heart swept by the wind

    Closed eyes for a moment
    Soul and mind are at peace
    A dream flows forever
    Untamed thoughts never cease

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    poett commented on By the Wind

    06-03-2013

    Lovely write. I truly enjoyed all your poems I read tonight ... ill be back later hugs
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    irreverent commented on By the Wind

    02-01-2011

    3rd stanza, 2nd line - 7 syllables...you could change it to -worlds discovered in flight- and keep the six syllable count. I don't normally do that - but the poem is beautiful, very close to perfect :) 10
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    MootPoint

    02/01/2011

    Thanks, I didn't notice that. That is exactly what I am looking for in this site. I will change it here and on my back up copy. Muchas gracias senor. :)

    MootPoint

    02/01/2011

    Opps, I should say señorita. :)

    MootPoint

    02/01/2011

    Undecided to go with unveil. What do you think?

    MarionYost commented on By the Wind

    11-02-2010

    from what I got from the last stanza this could be tagged "Inspirational" As well, but.. Maybe It's me :) creative little ditty none the less. I enjoyed this. All the best -Marion-
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    MootPoint

    11/03/2010

    Yes, I hope this may inspire poets. Thanks for the comment. :)

    soulwriter commented on By the Wind

    10-14-2010

    Definitely a flowing floating subject that is ethereal and pure... this piece offers the reader a heavenly view. Enjoyed
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    MootPoint

    10/14/2010

    Thank you so much :)

    Teardrops commented on By the Wind

    10-12-2010

    Beautiful poem and well written loved the content . Will be back to read again Marie
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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