Call You Mine

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This is dedicated to the love that I hold and know. So strong as the ocean that holds its tone. This is what I know will carry me floating away to newest places and stay. Thank you!

Call You Mine

Scince the time I knew,
The cold world grew,
Too cold for me to be,
Right there next to you,
So with this I knew,
Things surely were hard,
This still carries me there,
To this place that I have,
In my mind alone, only,
So this is the place where I,
Say the thing that makes me,
Want to say to you the truest,
Reason this has created in me,
So it will instantly send to me,
The only innocence that is really,
Something in me that I need,
Not an enemy, a friend of you,
At odds with this new feeling,
That I am getting used to,
Real as the emotion that I see,
So real to me we know now,
That yes it is you that has,
Gotten into me so that,
I will call you mine!

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summerrose35 commented on Call You Mine

01-15-2010

This is beautiful.The emotions you share with so many my friend. It is always the same.We fear the loss,yet what good does it do to fear it?It steals your moments of happiness.Love with all you have and if it is meant to be, it will be yours.When you find it,there will be no doubt!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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