Can I buy you a drink?

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    Can I buy you a drink?



    I pour my thoughts
    on a blank page
    I watch the words
    spill across the surface
    as they attempt to absorb
    your undivided attention
    just a tiny drink
    of my soul

    ~vrj
    3-29-2010

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    NitaBoo commented on Can I buy you a drink?

    08-27-2010

    This is dougie...(fresh)................................

    Rhymer commented on Can I buy you a drink?

    08-25-2010

    You have my attention, interesting write. 10 from me...................

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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