CAN I FIGHT

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    CAN I FIGHT

     Tired and torn I am 
    No more Can I Fight
    The darkness continues 
    but no signs of light
    Swollen are my eyes
    They have been flowing all night

    NO MORE CAN I FIGHT 

    Waiting in want for your sight
    A river starts flowing again
    as the day departs
    with the arrival of night
    No more can I fight  

    Dont make me blight
    Give me your sight
    Give me a light
    So that I stand and say YES I CAN FIGHT


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    blackfootlady commented on CAN I FIGHT

    11-27-2010

    It's very simply.The poem is very good and has a good point at the end.nice write.I like this.God Bless-Black
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    rougepriest commented on CAN I FIGHT

    10-21-2009

    what are you fighting about ? how long has the fight gone on that you are so tired, why are you waiting for some one elses sight is your vision bad? blight refers to a cities ghettos and their condition, it has good rhyming but i am confused as to the subject
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    syed

    05/28/2010

    I m fighting for keeping the love of my beloved pure!!!! and this fight is been going on since the bow of love poked my heart. I know it might be confusing for you cause you might not feel the same way I do, that's perfectly fine!!!! thanks for your comment, and i hope I could explain it more to you but the words are to less to explain!!!!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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