Can't be tamed

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Its about being control and saying you can do what u want when u want and the person u are with shouldn't stop you. they should encourage you.

Can't be tamed

You tell me
To do this and that
But can't you see
That i am not like that
I am my own person
Not your toy
You can't turn me on and off
 When you are done with me
You have to let me free
Or not be with me
I can't understand why
You make me do what you want
You sometimes make me cry
I can't be tamed
You should know that
I will do what i want when i want
And you can't stop me
So I will fly
And you will see
That you can't tame me.

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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