Cant find a way to tell her

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    This is what happens when you dont go for it when youre attracted to someone

    Cant find a way to tell her



    It appears that once again im thinking too much,
    As is such,
    For a man who just wants the companionship of a woman,
    I cant seem to get the job done,
    Cant seem to make this easy, fun,
    I had a clear shot and should have taken it,
    Instead im here writing, regretting it,

    I just want to hold her hand,
    Sip some coffee in her presence, make her laugh and understand,
    That it was, is, a good idea to try me out, the new pair of kicks,
    The air up there, the relief from a ton of bricks,

    Ahhhh... Get out of your head! Just do it!,
    There! Ah, aint nothing to it,
    Who am i kidding, i fool only myself,
    Thinking too much of me, oneself,
    Ill get it right, i have a plan.
    I dont have a choice if i want to be the man.

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    redbloodink commented on Cant find a way to tell her

    02-14-2010

    King a lover lovers plea.... nicely down and well heard...... red

    KING commented on Cant find a way to tell her

    02-06-2010

    Thanks to everyone who read my work :)

    KING commented on Cant find a way to tell her

    02-06-2010

    Read the poem, Rosarito, failed attempt: That is a even clearer example of lut/romance and my inability to sieze it.

    Qualin commented on Cant find a way to tell her

    02-06-2010

    Good write friend telling it as you feel it is getting it off your chest invest time to locate the mistake "JUST DO IT"....Qualin

    Tempy commented on Cant find a way to tell her

    02-06-2010

    I enjoyed this alot!!! I think it's certainly something you may kick yourself over later in life!! It's great to be attracted to someone!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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