Can't Find My Mind

2 Comments

Can't Find My Mind

There is so much more to think about
Than just wondering how
You're going to make it out
A thousand little eyes
Stare right through you with despise
A little boy has no innocents
For you have stripped it out of his chest
He wants to just go home
He Can't find his mind
He doesn't know what to say
When he doesn't know if your telling him a lie
An idea will commence proliferation
When he won't even speak
Till a whole new world is made
Where he is no longer weak
Think about how far away he can go
Someone tell him please
There is no need for this
Someone break inside
Someone not likey to be a disease
Find the reason he can't get up
From being on his knees.

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

ShadowStealer commented on Can't Find My Mind

08-10-2010

Like britt said it is a very well put poem. I like how you work in the explanation for how someone might feel when they can't get back up after being knowcked down. Wonderful!!! ShadowStealer

poetlyrics33

08/14/2011

That's exactly what I was trying to convey!

britt commented on Can't Find My Mind

08-06-2010

Very very well put. I really like it. This is a great poem.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

Unknown Source

poetlyrics33’s Poems (31)

Title Comments
Title Comments
You and Me 1
No Key 0
Sorry Sinking Soul. 1
A Heart on the Outside. 1
Easy As Pride. 1
Here it is, Don't make me regret it. 0
I'm not insane... Yes you are. 0
Wont Stop (Pt. 2) 0
Wont Stop 0
Ever green, Never To Be. 0
SHE. 0
You Can't. 0
An Anxious Castaway 0
An Infamous Memory. 1
Surreal Reality. 1
Can't Stand. 0
Can't Find My Mind 2
Just... Justified 1
Thy self be hidden. 0
Amy. 1
Embracing Letting Go. 2
Sleep. 2
I've Arrived. 1
Deceiving love charmer. 2
Finding What Matters 0
Forget it. 1
Today there is a regret. 0
Door. 0
I'll Use Hope, To Cope 0
Saved. 3
Even In The Night 1