Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

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Working on this one, finding it hard to make it flow and orginize my thoughts. I'm Mad Mad i say. Not!

Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

Stonewalling is the ultimate defense
Stone fox I am.
Got burned,
Crushed, heart broken
Several years behind me now.

Countless days spent insane in the brain.
Wasted years gone by
Nights days full of emptiness
Devoid of laughter, sunshine,
Unoccupied it said
I locked myself away
Insane in the brain

Unable to find my way out of my misery
Of madness
I was in a maze
stuck on a love
That was never meant to be
I couldnt see
Adift in the mind

Insane in the brain

Couldnt tell when my lucidness returned

Indeed was I ever sane at all…….

Hidden away

Insane in the brain.

I thank you for breaking my heart
That one summer’s day.

If it were not for that day
I wouldn’t strive to be the
person
I want to be this day.
My mind goes blank with strong expressions of silence
Still insane in the brain.

 

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earthly commented on Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

06-08-2010

Aren't we all at times-a little insane in the brain that is-LOL-memorable read-Namaste...Earthly

StandingBear commented on Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

06-08-2010

A great self purging work you share. Deep thoughts rise to the surface. Great write!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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