Carnal Crush

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  • Erotic

    Carnal Crush

    Using pointillism, Ill drill my name in you
    Making perfect circles with a corkscrew
    I want to tear you apart
    I knew it right from the start
    Nothing can calm my heart
    Because you make me breathe hard
    And squeeze in
    It’s hard to not be taken away for a while
    And now everyday I smile
    Thinking of you all the while
    But I can’t tell you
    Because I’m shy as a child

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    phatdaddee commented on Carnal Crush

    05-13-2009

    You sick twisted little person! Good Job!

    origionalmerlin commented on Carnal Crush

    04-08-2009

    passes the drill...dont forget to use braille too, it helps to read it in low light, and fog

    markrohaley commented on Carnal Crush

    01-21-2009

    hmmmm

    ivecute77 commented on Carnal Crush

    11-23-2008

    kind of demented, but well written

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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