Carnal Pleasures

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  • Erotic

    Carnal Pleasures

    Simplistic pleasures
    so hard to define
    Wet hot kisses
    clearly sublime
    Lost in heated vaults
    of animalistic design
    This wicked game of torture
    is totally divine
    With candlelight and music
    it seems so romantic
    With whips and chains
    its so translantic
    Karma Sutra
    can be tantric
    Tie me up
    and make me frantic
    Twisting and writhing
    without any measure
    Makes me explode
    with lust and pleasure
    Time stops
    this I know for sure
    Making me scream
    for some kind of closure
    Make me moan
    with my sex so slick
    My mind goes blank
    with every lick
    No time for thoughts now
    so don’t make me pick
    Just make me come
    and do it quick

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    soulwriter commented on Carnal Pleasures

    04-30-2010

    Your words do a sential alluring flavor that begs for the reader to "cum" here quick... your choice of verbal pleasure is artfully displayed in a very talented way! 10

    subby77

    05/02/2010

    Thank you for your pleasing comment! It was wonderful to hear that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

    lonewolf commented on Carnal Pleasures

    05-01-2009

    excellent poem. you got being erotic, down to an art

    kdarcy commented on Carnal Pleasures

    04-13-2009

    Carnal indeed, loved it

    WordSlinger commented on Carnal Pleasures

    03-24-2009

    Awesome, ;) I gave this poem a 9

    Phoenix9 commented on Carnal Pleasures

    12-21-2008

    wow, now that is a great poem, very well written with great imagery

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