cars, bars, and mar

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    • stonie
    • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

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    this is tied in with the previous one even though it is a few years older, it's when i was really whacked out my head for alittle bit but at the same time i knew that alot of the things around me were unavoidable.

    cars, bars, and mar

     This has gone so, so far

     that i may never break free of the bars

     this force thats stick around, keeps me to the ground

     way back then it seemed so right

     but now i pay the price, that price is mar

     I am not sorry for the little things i did

     because you opened your mouth and sucked me in

     and i tried to make amends

     amends to you would lead to sin

     and yet i almost let it suck me in

      Stay away, fade to grey

     i can no longer live this way

     you will see what you have done

     you will see it once i won

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