Cascading Waterfalls

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Nature's Refresher course in Beauty's clarity!!!

Cascading Waterfalls

Deep within green hued scenery

Sounds of thunder pound my senses

As the yellow mid-day sun peeks overhead

Playing a game of peek-a-boo with my feelings

Deep within this jungle and in my mind

As the mist is a refresher course in happiness

Water is near as I can hear its crashing

Although the sounds of pounding is descending

I'm uplifted by the tingling of euphoric sensing

As the leaves fall away taking my breath away

I spy a brown and green clearing of serenity

As rushing water is hurriedly gushing down a chasm

Tumbling and crashing down between strong stones

Effervescently repeating its greeting of welcoming

I'm blessed and glistening from both sun and mist,

In the love found washing over me in resplendence

Being in awe of the power of love to baptize me in feelings

From this Cascading Waterfall

 

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MalikPeterson commented on Cascading Waterfalls

05-23-2010

I see you are in your color bag as of late. The imagery in this piece was great and it was a deeply emotional sort of deal. There was an intrinsic connection with nature here...and what better reminder of beauty could there be?

SILKYTWEED

05/24/2010

Yeah trying it on for size, a work in progress....Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting, much appreciation....ONE

MalikPeterson

05/24/2010

no problem at all

mindy9968 commented on Cascading Waterfalls

05-11-2010

Some of your phrases really were great. I especially loved the phrases: "As the mist is a refresher course in happiness" and: "I'm blessed and glistening from both sun and mist" Those were awesome! Thanks for posting!

SILKYTWEED

05/19/2010

Thank you kindly, mindy...this was an adlib write challenge from another poetry site...asking for a piece of fluffy feeling poetry as opposed to a hardcore surrealism (winks) lol.....Namaste

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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