Cathedral Spiritual

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    Cathedral Spiritual

    Pink and grey walls rise like castle parapets
    Reflecting the sunrise in golden hues
    I ride along the canyon to the sound of leather
    Creaking softly in the tranquil mountain air

    Sweat and horse, with layers of dust
    Well worn jeans against a speckled hide
    Gently swaying in a unified rhythm
    Languidly haze swirling about our feet

    Around the bend we startle snow geese
    Flocks floating, rising, settling serenely
    Angling, landings against the lapping waters
    Black tipped wings against wintry white

    Sandhill cranes foraging for cutthroat trout
    Reflecting blue beside the meandering creek
    Majestically standing, patiently waiting
    Blue dragon flies dancing within their reach

    Off the beaten path we wander
    Past yucca swaying in the breeze
    O’er grama blue as sky beneath us
    Cushioned carpet of pine and peat

    Rock squirrels scurry across a Douglas fir
    Scolding woodpeckers on a burnt oak tree
    The chorus is merged by the hoot of an owl
    And the clip clop against rocks as we proceed

    Canopies of piñon line the trail
    Mixtures of conifer shade the landscape
    Grey blue greens with clusters of sienna
    Cathedral spiritual within an ageless solitude

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    peacefully commented on Cathedral Spiritual

    12-30-2009

    What a wonderful picture you have painted. Wish I were with you.

    Lolee commented on Cathedral Spiritual

    09-12-2009

    Well...I just want to get on my horse! (and I don't even have one!) What wonderful imagery! Looking forward to reading more of you girl! Thank you much! Uh-oh...was that the sound of the Whippoorwill? Nope. Just my husband snoring, and whistling! God love him.

    WordSlinger commented on Cathedral Spiritual

    07-29-2009

    Lena, I can imagine this on my horse, so texas has places like this, awesome. great write...

    ginga commented on Cathedral Spiritual

    07-29-2009

    Lena,. This poem has to be my fave of the 3 nature poems you posted on P.O.E.T.S.There is a meter and rhythm to it that speaks of the galloping of the horse. Very nice and well-crafted work. ginga

    dragonfly1023 commented on Cathedral Spiritual

    07-23-2009

    what a beautiful escape back to nature you have presented in this captivating write LenaMP. I want to be there now. I agree with Chaos 100%. bravo!!

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