Cause and effect

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This man drives me crazy. But i love him non the less

Cause and effect

Cause and effect

Was it for the best

Is it for the rest

Cessation of the best

To have met

One winter’s

Early part

Of a new day.

Breakfast for two

Was it a chain of reaction

Of that wondrous moment

When your eyes penetrated mine

They seemed like fine sparkling happy eyes

As I Looked

And gazed into the deep green sea

Thinking I could get lost in them eyes

Green with envy

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redbloodink commented on Cause and effect

05-30-2010

I have been lost like this before...... Lost in the eyes of another..... I hope the next time her and I get lost together and find ourselves one under the pertecting wings of God ( Jesus) and His Angels...... red

alb29oclfl commented on Cause and effect

05-08-2010

although it has been awhile, I have been lost in eyes of women like you have describe so well here

bluskyinthenite

05/08/2010

Yes I'm lost and can't seem to find my way

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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