cause she loved him

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    cause she loved him

    His life was never easy everyone only seen him as a thug
    but he was only a person in a bad situation seeking love
    just needing someone when hes down to give him a hug
    all they can picture him as is a touble maker with a rifal
    not knowing that he doesnt have a gun just himself and a bible
    the people in his world are nothing but spiteful
    he didnt care he couldnt see his future his past was in the way
    it was like he couldnt move forward he was in this confused state
    prayer opened his heart and steered him straight
    he thaught god was the only one who knew him until her
    she changed his world
    she was the perfect one more then just a girl
    she met the real person in him she found out he was real intalectual
    and he found out she wasnt a regular person she was special
    he thaught she would never come but god promised him the real deal no replica
    they got to know eachother focused into her past
    fell in love quick they couldnt wait life moved to fast
    heartbroken but he gave her the cast
    he started working lagitimitly great thing cause she was expecting
    normal boy from the hood thats his life setting
    but knowing he was graduatin college in 2 months felt resurecting
    valentines day rolled around the day of love but he had school
    the baby is kicking hunny come here but he said not now that wasnt at all cool
    first silent cry she had cause of him never show your hurt was her rule
    graduating college never thaught he would be a doctor
    your world is holding your baby girl shes so proud of you how could you mock her
    he did but didnt ever notice it but she cheered up cause she seen the ring you brought her
    a year has passed he missed christmas,her birthday,new years,even valentines
    he brought her a ring,necklace,bracelet,perfume and appoligise millions of times
    but not being able to spend time with the love of your life is a love crime
    years have passed and shes getting tired of being together but being alone
    and his life consists of him talking to her only on the phone
    his daughter kindergarden graduation everyone but him had shown
    he walked in the house to see that clothes were packed and his world was crying
    first time he seen it but it was the only time he made it home in good timing
    he wondered what was going on he wasnt doing anything wrong and he wasnt lying
    but his problem was he spent more time ignoring her hanging with friends
    when really befor the money she was the only person who could make him grin
    when he noticed all the things he missed he noticed the money in his pocket was pretend
    he noticed material things mean nothing to love
    he noticed over love is god and the only thing above
    he grabbed his princess and his wife and sqeezed them like his first hug
    every second he didnt spend with his family he made up for finally love he could see
    after work he went right home when he went to hang with his friends along came his family
    because he noticed material things only last for years love is for ETERNITY
    -GODS SON

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    lillyrain commented on cause she loved him

    05-23-2009

    Wow I'm truly completely blown away by that poem. WOW it is really just wow. I love everything about it I wish i could write like that.

    UnbreakableLove commented on cause she loved him

    05-21-2009

    wow. That's the only thing I can think of for this....amazingly wow. It strikes a heartstring with me. A lost love....I think I have lost him....and did I ever really have him?

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    quise’s Poems (32)

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    A kiss unfelt 1
    what a heart would say 0
    my silent cry 0
    love or illusion 0
    The question 1
    LOVE IS TRUE 0
    REST IN SLEEP 0
    wheres my hoodie 0
    new smile 0
    living dead 1
    black rose 2
    glass flowers 1
    too late to give up 4
    is he just a man 3
    why does she stay 4
    i still love you 0
    the reson i cant love 3
    spontanious (short) 0
    blessed (short) 0
    eternity (short) 0
    confusion (short) 0
    take it slow (short) 0
    blessing or lesson 0
    where did she go 0
    i will 0
    my hearts cry 1
    cause she loved him 2
    my final goodbye 2
    king hansom 2
    poem my heart wrote 0
    my late night prayer for her 3
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