CHANGING MY LIFE

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CHANGING MY LIFE

 

The changes that I’m facing

I have to stay strong and take it

I’m going through changes in my life

 

There’s going to be high mountains and rocky road that I have to travel and climb

To live a better life

 

My mother said if you see a good opportunity

Don’t you never waist any time

 

I’m changing my life

 

I’m wondering how am I gone get there

I will soon one day fly

To see King Jesus beyond the sky

 

Many people laughs and says that I want make it

But I’m going to show them by changing my life

 

I’m flying to the other side

And when I get there I want have to cry

Because I’ve made it by changing my life

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Romano commented on CHANGING MY LIFE

10-28-2009

This shows a person who wants a different life style from what they once had, and wants to do better and is given strength to do better, to realize a change is needed to look directly in the mirror and say i'm tired of this i want a new life is a huge step in anyones life and is greatly noted as a strong person............i like it

almonord1990

10/29/2009

thank you

rougepriest commented on CHANGING MY LIFE

10-05-2009

Hi you have spellings issues and grammatical nightmares if your going to make it learn this, the devil is in the details! cant take short cuts or be lazy, what you dont know Learn! or ask. this is more like a leter of introduction and mission statement than a poem. If this was meant to be an ebonics lesson, state it or risk confusion on the part of the reader. if you want particulars i can show you. let me know i can try to help. or if you just want happy jesus comments im not the one.the sentiment is good but boring, do something exciting and different we all change every day....not a poem. poems express emotion and pain , ecstacy etc. or grand ideas. P

Luscious40

10/28/2009

O.M.G. A young brother trying to express himself.. Pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!! Go back and proof read your comments. You have periods and did not capitalize after. Leave the young man alone, we have ohh so many young adults in this world doing wrong, and you want to down a brother for doing something positive.. Like he said.. If you don't like it, don't read.. More power to you brother-- remember this" We need the Haters"

Doninha commented on CHANGING MY LIFE

10-04-2009

This poem gives me strength! I hear gospel music in my mind when I read this poem.

almonord1990

10/04/2009

thank you

MIKE3447 commented on CHANGING MY LIFE

10-04-2009

THIS IS A VERY NICE POEM.. WE ALL ARE GOING THROUGH CHANGES, SO WE NEED TO HEAR MORE TOPICS LIKE THIS

almonord1990

10/04/2009

thank you

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7