Chat room abrevations...

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This was inspired by hanging out with my queer nephew and me telling him brb... I gotta pee....... Thanx Chaz love ya......

Chat room abrevations...



brb, I gotta pee....
I stepped out the back door...
And did it right there....!
Why would you care?

Be right back...,brb!
I just had to pee....
So I came back...
Some place dirty and black!


We share tmi....
Did you go pee?,brb...
We ask why.....
As the ragging rivers flow back to the sea!


To much information....
Tmi...
Chat room abrevations...
I just sigh...!!!!!


Omg...., Oh my God!
Lmao...,laughing my ass off...
Lol, laughing out loud...
Tmfi...,or too much fucking information...!


How about wtf....?
That is what the fuck..
In my head...
All of this got stuck...
Just for me saying brb...
Now what do you think of me?
BRB.........,gotta pee!!!!!!

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frazel5 commented on Chat room abrevations...

01-01-2010

Wow this is so what it's like! Haha! I laughed so hard. Great job! ~the fraz

redbloodink

01/31/2010

yes it is..... ty Frazel for reading my work and your comments.......

amithissecret commented on Chat room abrevations...

12-24-2009

lamo this is thw coolest poem ive read lol this is funny love it

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty Secret...... I'm glad you laughed as so many did.....

wamomo commented on Chat room abrevations...

12-23-2009

ROTFLMBO...hysterical, red! Very comical and whimsical! Good job!

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty Wam...... I'm glad so many got a laugh...........

blanket commented on Chat room abrevations...

12-22-2009

LMFAO FTW~~~ur so good! I hate chat-speak, but I'm guilty as charged from time to time...too funny chick

redbloodink

12/23/2009

ty......

FindingJune commented on Chat room abrevations...

12-22-2009

OMG...LMAO...TMI...LOL...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA....brb...no...sry...g2g...BBL Funny Red!

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty June...... glad I could make you laugh....... Hope you are well haven't seen you so much.....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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