Cherish

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    Cherish

    A gentle kiss, a sweet caress
    how I cherish moments like this,
    I listen as your heart pounds in your chest
    not even close to what I like best,

    feeling your arms wrapped around me tight
    never in my life has anything felt so right,
    staring deeply into your eyes
    both the color of clear spring skies,

    watching your lips slowly curve into a smile
    making my heart swell and everything worth while,
    laying so close its hard to tell
    where I end and you begin, a feeling I know so well,

    when I'm with you I feel so free
    emotions overwhelm me, but I'm so happy,
    you've brought back hope to my sore heart
    but oh how I miss you whenever we're apart,

    I don't know what I did, but I'd do it again
    that brought you into my world, and made this happen,
    All I can think about is you
    the funny things you say, the sweet things you do,

    everything you are, everything indeed
    is everything I never knew, would be everything that I need.

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    frog commented on Cherish

    05-13-2009

    I like the part about where it mentions where one person ends and the other begins. strikingly familiar to me.

    Paradice21 commented on Cherish

    03-07-2009

    You write the way I write I mean with such love and passion in your heart. I can feel it in your poem Cherish which was beautifully written and see it in your picture. The passion, love and desire. Wish I could have rated it higher. Definitely about I said a 9. But not everyone knows real and true beauty when you see it. I am inspired to read more of your work. I do not get on as much lately but when I do I will read soem more of your work! Bravo.Very Nice poem!

    muttman1 commented on Cherish

    02-05-2009

    i'm speechless, this is very sensual

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