Chocolate Love

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    Chocolate Love

    Swaggering from euphoric intoxication

    Love follows, that She may inhale

    the noxious vapors of all She has smitten.

     

    Sobriety of the mundane has long since

    departed in utter humiliation. How else would

    one behave in Her presence?

     

    For is She not the most self-centered, toxic

    of vacuums, jealous and spoiled as a child

    unwilling to share Her all-consuming air

    like a box of rare chocolates?

     

    Is She not the most indignant & impatient

    of creatures waiting to be savored & consumed

    one luscious, irresistible morsel at a time,

     

    slowly,

    erotically…

    In the most exotic of places?

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    cheronld commented on Chocolate Love

    05-24-2010

    nicely done......it had a subtle sensuality that was really beautifully written...

    Crush commented on Chocolate Love

    05-24-2010

    i like it...i love the flow and the way you use words. "sobriety of the mundane has long since departed in utter humilaition " brilliant ! i have to give this a 10.

    47fleas

    05/24/2010

    ...thank you SOOOOO much! =:0)

    Crush

    05/24/2010

    what is the meaning of the nickname, 47 fleas ?

    47fleas

    05/24/2010

    It is a composite from 2 of my favorite employs. "47" was my employee # at a long standing job & "fleas" refers to my self employment as an antique & collectible's store owner ("flea market").

    Crush

    05/24/2010

    oh, lovely. thank you.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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