Chocolate you

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    Chocolate you

     So smooth , dark brown, sweet,
    to the eye pleasing, to the taste,
    so teasing.
    A temptation so impossible to resist,
    oh but a kiss,
    from those beautifully soft chocolate
    lips,
    never tasted as good as the last time,
    every time,
    drawing me near,
    only to ensnare,
    to trap, to hold, to keep me,
    addicted to his chocolate lovin'
    eternally. 

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Chocolate you

    11-15-2010

    WOW!! I love the gentle eroticism of this piece. Subtly sexy and teasing. Nothing like some chocolate kisses to get the passion going. Loved this one........E
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    truth917 commented on Chocolate you

    11-06-2010

    Very lucky man! This shows your passion for this person and he who has the kiss as such is heaven sent
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