March In Victory

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  • christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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March In Victory

He poored his love out for you and I
So we can all march in victory
so set the sails so you can drift
in a land beyound what the eye can see
To a place full of musical instrements
full of devine peace and love
To home in which we will really be free
Don't you see were just on a journy
too one of two places you see
heaven or hell
so which will it be
don't stand there and debate
for it might end up being to late
jump on the ball, sattle the horses
and lets march into victory

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gregster commented on March In Victory

04-30-2011

i dpo love it.its beautiful and simple.ur a great writer

christianprep

05/04/2011

dpo? whats that mean? thanks for commenting and reading my poem

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

christianprep’s Poems (44)

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Pa 0
March In Victory 1
Dateless 1
Prayer Study and Poem 1
A letter To God 0
Goal Against The World 0
Book Revelations and revelation 1
Mother Here's My heart 0
No Friend 1
Beast 2
Silent Tears 2
Rippled Heart 3
My Book Immortal 1
Danger Great Revelations 2
Abba 3
Saved 1
Mistakes 0
Showstoppers 1
Nightmare 4
I prayed to God 0
Eke Towed Prince 1
Soulmate 2
Asylum 8
Prosper A Fate 2
Hellfire 1
Dangerous 2
Broken Family 1
Depression in her heart 2
Everything You Reap You Sow 2
Tell me Your Beutiful 1
Cauious and Open 1
I am proud to call you savor 3
Simple flames 2
christmas children 2
MOSES 4
Not My Time 1
Just Time 3
Dawning 1
I am God 2
weeping tears 1
Dance with me 1
DARKNESS 1
hail third series 0
heaven series two 5