christmas children

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

    Poem Commentary

    I had a poem in my heart it was not quite this but it turned out this way...i think its a good short poem

    christmas children

    Children playing
    Little feet clacking
    Parents smiling
    As Christmas nears
    Giving time is here

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    Teardrops commented on christmas children

    12-02-2009

    nice you say it all in few words keep writing i would love to read more of you poems

    whiteoleander commented on christmas children

    12-02-2009

    simple and sweet i like it you sould add more i loved to hear it

    christianprep

    12/02/2009

    i don't really out my best ones on here... this is how it turned out but thank you

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    Dateless 1
    Prayer Study and Poem 1
    A letter To God 0
    Goal Against The World 0
    Book Revelations and revelation 1
    Mother Here's My heart 0
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    Beast 2
    Silent Tears 2
    Rippled Heart 3
    My Book Immortal 1
    Danger Great Revelations 2
    Abba 3
    Saved 1
    Mistakes 0
    Showstoppers 1
    Nightmare 4
    I prayed to God 0
    Eke Towed Prince 1
    Soulmate 2
    Asylum 8
    Prosper A Fate 2
    Hellfire 1
    Dangerous 2
    Broken Family 1
    Depression in her heart 2
    Everything You Reap You Sow 2
    Tell me Your Beutiful 1
    Cauious and Open 1
    I am proud to call you savor 3
    Simple flames 2
    christmas children 2
    MOSES 4
    Not My Time 1
    Just Time 3
    Dawning 1
    I am God 2
    weeping tears 1
    Dance with me 1
    DARKNESS 1
    hail third series 0
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