Clarity Haiku

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    Clarity Haiku

     Embrace self-control
    When your emptiness feels whole
    It can save your soul

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    Tempestlady commented on Clarity Haiku

    12-10-2010

    I wish i ad more of it! Most times i can't help it i just let it fly! and go however it goes. The fit hits the shan so to speak. LOL Write on..
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    danmartyjake1 commented on Clarity Haiku

    02-28-2010

    Clearly gives clarity to the reader. Very succinctly put.... Well Done!
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    icu2 commented on Clarity Haiku

    01-07-2010

    What I get out of this is: When you are hungry, realize that this is a good thing. It is not healthy to always be full....correct? Good job Kaiprin! I like this, and embrace this way of life.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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