Clearly Thinking About Confusion

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    Clearly Thinking About Confusion





    I found myself living someone else's dream
    and wondered why someone else is living mine
    In an attempt to hold on to memories
    I missed out on living in present time


    I thought I believed in more than I knew 
    If only I knew what I wanted to find  
    The more questions I ask to find my way
    The more I wander around like I'm blind



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    TinaD commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    01-13-2011

    The poem does give one the gut feeling of confusion. Nice read.

    tenderpoison commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    01-01-2011

    perhaps one of very favorites of all of yours - and that's saying something. I think I've followed that signpost before....

    smaffa commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    10-16-2010

    Awesomesauce! Well written - I can't even pick a favorite line because I like each one!

    RPT40

    10/22/2010

    Thank yousauce!! Lol

    WordSlinger commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    10-11-2010

    lol, this is the hair of the dinosaur, lol, I hear that, good write all around, lol, ty WS, 11 from me

    RPT40

    10/22/2010

    Lol thanks WS

    Olan01 commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    09-14-2010

    Yes, yes, yes; I know the feeling and so well expressed. This is not an easy poem to write and you do it so vividly. Olan

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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