climax of a kiss

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    climax of a kiss

    From across the room they see each other
    they link by the eyes
    a yearning draw, pulls like gravity, they begin to move
    the music and dancing dies

    they meet in the middle, never breaking their gaze
    silence then seems in the place
    they move closer to to each other, expectantly
    begin the invasion of personal space

    ever closer, closer to the need
    the mood grows heated
    they start an embrace, hand to hand
    this is what they needed

    then...it happens.

    she exhales gently, whisping her hair
    so close to a kiss
    he inhales her breath, and savors
    a moment like this

    the anticipation grows, then the kiss is complete
    their needs they obey
    this will never be taken away
    this moment in time, forever will stay.

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    Charmin commented on climax of a kiss

    04-23-2009

    Well done!! Your choice of wording made it easy to visualize the moment.

    RobinL commented on climax of a kiss

    04-22-2009

    You captured the moment beautifully. Inyense. Love, Robin

    kdarcy commented on climax of a kiss

    04-20-2009

    Great lines hold alot of emotion, thanks

    raggedypoet commented on climax of a kiss

    04-03-2009

    Very Very nice!!!Is it hot in here y'all!!

    kitap2006 commented on climax of a kiss

    04-03-2009

    mmm i feel deeply when i read this GREAT WORK

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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