Climb To Happy

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Climb To Happy

I survived.

It was only a transformation after all.

Still, there are fragments of chaos inside -

I haven’t a grip on any of them.

 

You know what powerless means?

Fleeting promises within glass walls.

There is more to penance than

no privacy.

I can’t remember a sin.

Perhaps the pawning of

gold rings

 

Now, on a ladder

with rungs that wrap around me

welding themselves together,

conspiring against joy.

 

 The world is a tunnel.

Am I banhammered from the sky?

I had a yard swing once,

a front row seat to an orchestra of crickets

and ice tea on the window sill.

Memories, they twist my mind

as much as falling.

 

Cloud formed hope,

droplets of little red candy

and I stumble on words of

disbelief.

 

I climb.  Shouldn’t I climb?

I have changed so much already,

yet another precipice.

I can laugh this time-

after thrashing a bit.

I tied a rope

somewhere in the middle.

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stever commented on Climb To Happy

06-24-2013

WOW,,, that was one of the best poems i ever read,, the style is so in tune,, yet out there,,very cool,, read one of mine plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,.[.4 walls] is newest TY stever

KLS commented on Climb To Happy

01-18-2013

Wow, thats really awsome!!!! I did enjoy this poem a lot. I hope to see more like it in the near future.?

Kanicki commented on Climb To Happy

12-12-2010

You gotta a lot of Wow in your style, very powerful metaphors! Oh too often the climb to happy can be steep but when one looks back sometimes we just have to laugh at where the terrain lead us....LOL. Peace, Love and Light

Rhymer commented on Climb To Happy

08-17-2010

I like the metaphors in this poem, it lets the reader ponder the hidden meaning behind the words. It reminds of struggling to succeed, but past sins, nuances of life keeps holding you back. Of course in the end everyone has the right to enjoyment and laughter. Nice write.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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