CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

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I WAS HAVEING MOMMENT ON NEW YEARS. I WAS FEELING LONLY. AND I WAS REALLY WANTING TO SPEND NEW YEARS WITH MY EX. I KINDA MISSED BEIN IN LOVE. COME FIND ME ON http://www.myspace.com/karma884

CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

Empty house...With no sound.
Only your voice echo's.
All you got is your self...And your shadow.
I'll hold it tight if thers tomorrow.
slide down the wall.
& say good night with my sarrow.
blow out the candles
only thers no wish.
or a kiss right after.

cause with closed eyes no one will ever kno.
what gose on up stairs...In my head.
I dont think you'll care.
I'll lay here...and cry....I close my eyes.

No touch no sound.
Nobody is ever around.
it' only your footsteps on the ground.
no hugs no hand.
nobody to hold you.
when ur feeling damned.
 Alone silent.
no one to look @ and feel better.
I didnt realize till now...
i really miss bein..loved.

copyright  2010   all rights reserved
By Karma




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toredbloodink commented on CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

08-01-2016

A constant reminder of how life can keep you moving no matter how you feel... The one and only Redbloodink says so..... Thanks for this reminder

Deepbeauty17 commented on CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

04-13-2010

This is a beautiful poem you can really feel what your were sayin

redbloodink commented on CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

04-13-2010

I already commented on this once... didn't even remember doing so.... Our poems hold hands as they Ink up our two pages seperatly in thier own ways...... I live this feeling every day and choose to ... I would like a mate but on her I wait....... red

Artie commented on CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

02-18-2010

Excellent!! You capture the feelings of loneliness so well. Going through this, can and will make you a stronger woman - 10 from me

stellar commented on CLOSED EYE'S- NEW POEM

01-14-2010

Ahhh...this is beautifully sad...I can really feel the ache of longing...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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