Closing the Door

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  • Letting Go

    Closing the Door

     You were the one to break my heart,
    you're the reason we fell apart,
    but now you're coming back for more,
    because you couldn't shut love's door,
    Now after all my lonely nights,
    and after all our endless fights,
    do you think i want you with me,
    so that you may finally see,
    what it's like to see a soul die,
    and watch me face down as I cry.
    Boy, you better just turn around,
    forgetting you, is what I found,
    so watch me as I slam this door,
    and won't look back forever more.

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    sk8erpoet commented on Closing the Door

    10-04-2010

    i really like it....it is really cool...love the metaphors.....great write...ssk8
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    1990lh commented on Closing the Door

    05-18-2010

    nice poe you sound really empower, so guess u exbf wanted another chance after he walk out on cuz of the drama with ur fam. im proud of so many ppl especially young girls just seem to let their bf walk in and out of their life when ever they seem fitting. but im glad that saw that life gose on and their is no reason to relive unnecessary pain.
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    Chaos128 commented on Closing the Door

    05-10-2010

    You had your shot, and you blew it! it's a statement that's been made countless times in countless ways. You've put a unique spin on it makes it stand out.
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    ayyan commented on Closing the Door

    04-26-2010

    Very nicely written about the shuting of way and door. How it is possible to make clean way free from this contact. Just think as it is a big matter.
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    Dano commented on Closing the Door

    04-08-2010

    sound like youve had enough... nicely structured... nicely written
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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