Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

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    Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    Cloudy with a chance of insanity
    Stifled, words choked from existence
    Rapid, endless restlessness
    Sleep, avoids me
    Plagued with an inefficient personality
    An anti-social cistern
    Hate filled non-conformist
    Revealing imprinted woes

    Cloudy with a chance of insanity
    Forecasted condemnation
    Planning societys demise
    The devils reformation
    Always on my mind
    Faithful follower
    Gathering supplies

    Cloudy with a chance of insanity
    Pipe, powder, wiring and shrapnel
    Building a better bomb
    Soon hell will come
    Payment for injustice
    A life uncontrolled
    Unforgiving soul
    Convinced his truth is the way

    Cloudy with a chance of insanity
    Poison picked
    Packed among the innocent
    Waiting
    Waiting
    Waiting
    Fifteen minutes in the shining sun
    Fame for an unknown
    Forcast coming through
    Cloudy with a chance of INSANITY...............
     

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    SuperChick76 commented on Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    10-21-2009

    I loved the choice of words. Very nicely put together. I think the grammar could be worked on a little, but no biggie. The flow seemed a little... Off. I find that's easy to fix with a syllible here, erase one there, idk, maybe it's just me. Probably is, haha! But, all in all, it was a BEAUTIFUL poem. VERY nicely written. Good job, I loved it!

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    I noticed some minor errors and will fix after the contest Thanks for the honesty. read Kings, Poets and Minstrels

    faithwalker7 commented on Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    10-21-2009

    Wow indeed..Fabulous I am in love..You are a very prolific writer. Hmmmm

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    thanks faithwalker I have been doing this so long it is second nature. I have some that are even better than this.........

    dumplin commented on Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    10-21-2009

    Drawn out in words my fears of the outside world. Nicely done!

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    I tried to think like a manic did I do good. Thanks and glad you liked it.....

    rougepriest commented on Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    10-21-2009

    nice lots of unspoken details in it. you should know that tomorrow the govt. plans to implement what they call net nuetrality in short taking control of the internet for our own good and safety , watch for it. loved the poem, read mine called infor. superstar its similar lucky, we are on the same page it seems

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    I read it it was good glads you liked this 1

    blanket commented on Cloudy With a Chance of Insanity

    10-21-2009

    Very nice work, I loved the way it builds with intensity towards the end. Love it, nice political and social poem. Love to see more.

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    I have a strange group of topics posted in the form of my work feel free to read and rate any of them you wish. Glad you like my little ditty.....

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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