Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


Coaxing My Soul Into The Open



This poem is in my first book, "In Forbidden Language"
published by Stillpoint Press, Spokane, Washington.

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Springsize commented on Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


The energy is pumping pure head, as I have left my emotions at the door. And before I dissect any message intent, I note first the punctuation missing. [Comma after mist, whirling]. I LOVE your ease of enjambment from line to line, as if you are a high wire walker... Next set you show good punctuation and commas...until ----[Need comma after minerals, to the]. [Need comma after night-wind, quilted] (excellent description of soft and pattern) ... and since you treated "quilted" as an adjective, it needs to have the comma, since you placed it after it's owner, the night-wind. The mechanics are not bad, at all... and as regards your intent and message, it is genius you describe your muse whose existence is as exciting as she is mysterious, as is are you... so one may easily see why you may be coaxed to open yourself to all vulnerability... so as to experience Nature, in full, by her call. And this Message causes pondering of Reader's own openness.



this is perfect and precise...thank you...

SuSpence commented on Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


Wow Dah, I already know you are a poetic prophet haha, but everytime i stop by to read I am reminded once again and it hits me like a ton of bricks all over again. I would say I was speechless, but I have already rambeled on too long Lol. I am adding this to my favs Dah, I have to read this one, often. My 2nd fav add tonight! -Spence



wonderful...thank you...

SavVySam commented on Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


I do not believe I've ever met anyone more present or tuned in to their surroundings and how they fit into the picture...Emoting empathetical phrases of wonder..



I am honored...thank you...

Hampton commented on Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


Nicely done Dah. A tribute to this place we call Earth filed with descriptive charm.



thank friend...

purpleswan commented on Coaxing My Soul Into The Open


I could feel myself walking there, obsorbing the essence of the ocean, the sand and the mist. Becoming a part of it all. I can close my eyes and see it all......wonderful, simply wonderful..................Swan



thank you...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

dahlusion’s Poems (122)

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Espresso Roma Café 1
Afternoon’s Impossible Heat 1
Spherical 1
Moths, Flame 1
To Say Goodbye Means Forgetting 1
"The Stillness Of Quiet Light" 2
The Vanishing Of Differences 2
Some god 3
Cattails 1
Invisible 3
The Persistence Of Nightmares 1
Gardener 4
Poison And Beauty 15
Moon Illusion 24
How We Live On Earth 13
Creation’s Splendid Spiritual Seduction 26
The Wings On Your Tongue 32
Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard 102
The Witch-Hunters 26
A Meditation On Autumn 33
The Most Savory Raw Liquid 28
The Alluring Wet Odor 27
Snakes Passing Out Apples 33
I Dismissed The Notion Of Death 36
The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid 28
Strangers With Memories 35
Glorify The Morning Silently 21
I Slept Late Into A Well-Worn Rest 21
the afterglow twisted its complexion 21
The Rapturous Ignorance Of My Human Moment 29
I Wait For God's Lips 31
Your Human Honey 16
I Have Gathered Your Energy 20
Poem For A Red Rose 24
discarded pages 25
when you stir in your sleep 26
scars void of desire 22
I Feel Summer’s Juice 24
Imagine Not Going To War 101
Like A Snowflake in August 36
Upon The Tender Leaves Of Spring 34
A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing 47
Hiding Behind Mythology 27
Coaxing My Soul Into The Open 24
Wet Thoughts For Thirsty Minds 46
720 Full Moons 65
Sexual Opium 41
I Praise The Morning Loudly 99
Your Sultry Whispering 29
I Feel Nothing 32
The Refusal Of Dead Roses: an unfinished love 24
ripples and waves 20
Now The Rain 18
Male Angels 21
Female Angels 18
The Atmosphere’
s Vibration
Show Me Something Invisible 29
Motionlessly, Mouths Touching. 19
The Scent Of My Lover 22
Sorrow’s Dangerous Death-Blade 33
Melodious Flames Intertwined 39
Entranced By Your Voice 28
my mouth is on yours 24
Father, I Have Sinned... 66
The Wild Mud Of Sleep 20
i am 26
Let Us Make Peace 21
That Twilight Flame 18
A Wellness Of Spirit 15
Kisses Like Deep Fruit 41
Pulsing. 13
common sense is My Savior 39
Earthy and Hot 22
Once I Was Somewhere 22
The Only God I Need 22
2 Ten AM 27
If I Ask The Dead For Memories 92
Your Intimate Voice 27
I Am Bound To You 36
Animals With The Same Motion 15
There Was Constant Throbbing 22
A Prisoner Of Hope 15
My Perfect Goddess 15
Twilight Is A Sudden Sadness 71
when the hour strikes 16
Autumn's Meloncholic Motion 28
Autumn's Organic Rust 22
My Perfect Swan 33
The Politeness Of Blue Sky 12
Upon My Lips 20
A Sensualist Articulation (Prose) 14
The Fragrance of Fantasy 43
During Our Most Secret Hours 22
Under A Sky Of Dreamy Dreams 29
The Sultry Warmth 21
When I Looked Again 29
The Sea 44
the Creator is us 29
Blades Of Lightning 30
A Dove Is Bleeding 26
I Hear Vaporous Rain 16
My Perfect Dove 35
If You Were Chocolate 59
You Do Not Deserve 37
A Shawl Of Indigo Aura 26
Then The Tumblers Rust 88
There Is Arrogance 41
The Singing From My Soul 23
You 18
Do Not Remain… 12
A Pyramid Of Stars 8
Holding A Storm 12
You Have Finally Faded 20
A Gothic Tale 19
A Gasping Goddess 18
Hour After Hour 13
Your Naked Smell 24
Unknown To Me Then 10
I Bring Myself Back From A Dream 16
When You Disappear 26