Cold Crow the Slayer

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Cold Crow the Slayer

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
bringing blood and sorrow
time is short, time is short
the time has come for bloody sport

no one knows where he came from
you will see him when your time comes
he walks the land searching for sick or old
his ways quick, his breath, cold

searching forever to do his skill
searching forever to hunt and kill
Cold Crow the Slayer
hunts from now into forever

time has come, death eternal
blood has spilled, a new miracle
Cold Crow, set my soul free
Cold Crow, is not our enemy

he has all the signs of death
blood, hellish, skeletal, only soul left
he cant be killed, he cannot die
under ground your body shall lie

he comes with burning sky
he shall free, soul fly high
free you with cresent blade
watching silently in the shade

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
bringing blood and sorrow
time is short, time is short
the time has come for bloody sport

time has come, death eternal
blood has spilled, a new miracle
Cold Crow, set my soul free
Cold Crow, is not our enemy

he guides your path to flame or light
the eternal right hand of god's might
wanderer of both worlds; day, night
angel of heal, demon of blight

his hooded cloak, blood soaked
with heaven and hell, he's entangled
he is the foremost, first
never to live, forever cursed

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
bringing blood and sorrow
time is short, time is short
the time has come for bloody sport

he eludes punishment and repent
extra life or time, he never lent
he allows for last words, promises out brought
innocents, murders, all have been caught

he creates rivers, of blood and despair
battles, all fallen, taken into care
he has felled demi-gods and kings
he is the killer of all things

time has come, death eternal
blood has spilled, a new miracle
Cold Crow, set my soul free
Cold Crow, is not our enemy

he is the messenger of future life
loyalty, god, religion, all belief
curropted burn, innocent fly
coming of damnation, souls alive

he is the entrance to a new world
a new, fresh, un-spoiled
he is the forever key
unlocking for all, The Eternity

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
bringing blood and sorrow
time is short, time is short
the time has come for bloody sport

time has come, death eternal
blood has spilled, a new miracle
Cold Crow, set my soul free
Cold Crow, is not our enemy

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
time has come, death eternal
bringing blood and sorrow
blood has spilled, a new miracle
time is short, time is short
Cold Crow, set my soul free
the time has come for bloody sport
Cold Crow, is not our enemy

Cold Crow, Cold Crow
time is short, time is short
Cold Crow.... Cold Crow....
set my soul free
time is short.... time is short....
blood has spilled
a new miracle

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SuSpence commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

05-20-2010

Wow impressive! This would make an excellant song. I could see it going several ways. Maybe like hardcore thrash metal, just blasting guitar and belting out the lyrics. Or in a more Pixies/Nirvana style, which could prove more effective. The playing with sound, Soft and Hard. Start out real slow, meloncholic rythem for the first couple of stanzas, then burst into the loud thrashing riffs and vocals, then a few verses later, back to the slow meloncholic verse. Play it back and forth to maximize its effectiveness and draw people into the song. Great work. -Spence

EvilPoems

05/20/2010

oh always, i saw it as a more metal peice then a Nirvana like peice... but each to their own!

whiteoleander commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

04-12-2010

I agree i would love to here these as lyrics with music your writings def have song potential!

EvilPoems

04/12/2010

you need to read my I Met Death, But I Didn't Die, i made it as an ICP tribute

hoda commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

03-01-2010

Great poem! And I like reading it out loud. Great job. ^_^

EvilPoems

04/02/2010

thank you!

Artie commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

03-01-2010

Sounds like it would be a kick ass song - 10 from me

stever commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

02-12-2010

NOW THIS JUST ROCKS ILOVE IT ..great imagry..love to hear the song you wrote to it....ty ty vm 4 readig all my stuff i will try to read all of yours soon, StEvEr

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