Come Out Shadow

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I wanted to make a happy sad poem and it was really fun and weird to do its like you have to fight with you self to create it.

Come Out Shadow

As we die we will know!

Life maybe a challange, don't let go.

Don't hide away, till the end of days.

Even though it may seem scary, look to the light and you will see clearly.

The beauty of life is here before you, even though it tore right through you.

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Teardrops commented on Come Out Shadow

02-06-2011

Now you bring light into your life truly a great poem Marie

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

AlisRed’s Poems (26)

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Life 1