Come Take My Hand Poem #2

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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Come Take My Hand Poem #2

I am the voice of my past & yours, take my hand, be not afraid
Come follow mommies heart, and let the rain storms song
Wash away all the sorrow, worry & pain, releasing it from your hearts misery
It’s time to let all of the sad past go, set free your heart to be strong

I am but a voice, soft and gay like woodland fairies lighting the path
My words I placed in the whispers of the wind, may they guide your journey
Your future filled with wonders & countless gifts thou hath
Discovering your prospects, your destiny, yet unwritten, in future memory

I am the voice that whispers softly in your dreams as night descends
As the whippoorwills song of love is carried to your dreams
Hear me calling your name, my darling son, I love you, without end
Like the seas love the shore, & fairies love their schemes

Together we shall lay all the sorrow of the past, far away from our hearts
As once I held you, my precious babe, let my words impart yours, like fine arts

Written by:
Pam Collins/Asha
2010©

A Sonnet
For

My son Timmy, for his birthday

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WordSlinger commented on Come Take My Hand Poem #2

08-25-2010

I am going to call you mom today, because this is awesome, if my mom wrote these for me, I would be so happy, your son will be proud of you Asha, :) ty WS

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

I do so hope he will be WS, I have not seen him since I moved to Florida, but we speak on the phone often, I missed him learning how to play the electric guitar that he got for Christmas last year so he played it for me over the phone,,,,,,,and I just thought wow!! he is really good, he takes after his grandfather, my dad, and can play by ear without music.......he is such a sweet smart young man.......he was tested in the fourth grade by Duke University as being genious,,,,,,,,I am very proud of him.......I can only pray that he will love the words that come from my heart to him and hopefully I will have a book of poems to leave him and he can say to his friends, look my mommy was a poet, and was published........seems like such a small thing to wish for, but to me it would be the greatest thing I have ever done besides bringing him into this world........thanks dear, I am happy that you read this piece and liked it........loves ya bunches......asha

angelchaser commented on Come Take My Hand Poem #2

08-24-2010

This is absolutely beautiful, Asha. Stunningly beautiful. 10 from me.

ApaqRasgirl

08/25/2010

thank you dear I am happy you liked it...thank for the sweet comment.....love asha

ginga commented on Come Take My Hand Poem #2

08-24-2010

Asha, Like a windswept melody this sings great notes and harmonies of love and that which is cherished , your son. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you dear, I am thrilled you liked it.....this was part of the long one that I tore apart...thanks for reading and helping......loves ya asha

Maleficent commented on Come Take My Hand Poem #2

08-24-2010

this is so beautifully written and heartfelt... a mother's unending love for her child expressed with such eloquence... happy birthday to Timmy! ;)

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you Mal I am so happy you liked it.....I have been struggling with this since last night, I wrote one that was just way to long and to complex for him so I broke it up and another friend is editing the other one for me.......thanks for reading,,,,,,I plan to have them printed up and framed to send to him for his birthday...........loves ya asha

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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