~*~Comin Home ~*~

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    ~*~Comin Home ~*~



    Well, what can i say, never in my mind did I picture it this way, I thought my life was already set, with shame and pain and a constant thick heavy rain.
    Never did i once think there was true love for me, how could someone love sad sad me, you took one look and said your not sad when you are with me.
    I know you mean what you say, I can feel you in everyway.
    I am no angel this i have shown, but my love for you has grown.
    choose you, I have already done and now our lives have begun.
    Love is now put in play,
    I walk out one door and open our own,
    I'm comin home,
    and in our love filled bed we will lay.

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    AZsbiggestfan commented on ~*~Comin Home ~*~

    02-18-2009

    aww you make my heart smile only you make that happen again i love your writtings they touch me in so many ways i am the luckyist man alive dont ever stop

    SunshineS commented on ~*~Comin Home ~*~

    02-15-2009

    That is really good, I really like it. Good Work.

    Achronos commented on ~*~Comin Home ~*~

    02-15-2009

    One can really relate to a poem like this i like it it's very thoughtful.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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