Coming Forth

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  • Death
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  • Devotion
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  • Passion

    Poem Commentary

    This how I feel now thanks to my bf that I love deeply. He saved me from the hurt I had before.

    Coming Forth

     To see the light
    warm and bright
    to leave the darkness
    cold and alone
    to see the happiness
    the joy all in all
    on how I feel
    It maybe called
    for what I leave behind
    to what I'm going to
    to start a new
    happy and revived
    the emptiness has gone
    so has the hurt
    the pain I had
    was healed by you
    the touch so gentle
    the sound so sweet
    the taste so rich
    I wonder how this was missed.

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    Artie commented on Coming Forth

    04-18-2010

    You describe your feelings very well. This piece really shows your passion - 10 from me
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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