COMMITMENT

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  • Devotion
    • CMarsh
    • Feeling much better now that I have found my purpose.

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    What I believe it takes from both partners in a relationship to make it work and last.cc

    COMMITMENT

    In my lifetime I thought I had experienced love;

    I was wrong

    The love I experienced was not true love;

    It was only a mirage, playing with mind, heart and soul;

    I 've traveled many miles searching for love;

     But finding only pain and sorrow

    Now I have found the one person who completes me;

    We have been apart many years;
    Crying many tears,reliving my fears

    We will conquer these fears together;

    Because our love knows no boundaries,

     Together I want to travel a path that neither has taken before;

    To give ones heart to another completely;

    I realize to do so requires great commitment;

    A commitment that I have never experienced;

    I am willing to make this commitment to my true love;

    Will we travel this path together?

    The answer lies within your heart!

     

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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    CMarsh’s Poems (19)

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