Completeness

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    Completeness

    Empty pages of desperateness

    Whisper the meaning of understanding.

    Music of endurance and beauty of images.

    I only ask for love not life.

    I guess it's impossible for me to have both.

    "Where are you my love?"

    For your love for me is my life

    Of completeness.

     

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    kdarcy commented on Completeness

    08-01-2010

    Many have it and don't realize it, those who want will find it, accepting when its appointed time arrives. Time will give you both, love and life or life with love. Be well, a nice write indeed
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    Marmorl73

    08/02/2010

    Thanks so much for your comment! :-)

    Papa commented on Completeness

    07-02-2010

    I know so many that are not complete,if there are not two heads in their shadow. Casting your own shadow is most important, with the sun at your back, you can see where you are going. Living a life for someone else is not living. You're lost in their shadow. You complete the picture.
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    Marmorl73

    07/02/2010

    Thanks so much for reading my poem. I appreciate it! :-) I agree with your comment.

    SavVySam commented on Completeness

    05-30-2010

    I lovely and meaningful work of heartfelt longing! Nicely done!
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    Marmorl73

    05/30/2010

    Thanks! :-)

    Chaos128 commented on Completeness

    05-18-2010

    An affecting statement. Know it's coming and it will arrive.
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    Marmorl73

    05/18/2010

    Thanks! :-)

    BikemanRJ commented on Completeness

    05-06-2010

    Anything is possible don't sell yourself short on thinking you can't have both life and love. Faith, Hope, and Love will take you a long way. God Bless Randy
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    Marmorl73

    05/07/2010

    So true. :-)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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