Confound

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    Confound
    Recently
    Something has come to me
    Tragedy
    Must I think so deep

    And fall into the depths again
    You catch my hand my friend
    So there I hang
    In the balance of your eyes
    Tell me angel
    Can you catch me every time
    Or will you change your mind

    Sweetly
    You crush my dreams with a smile
    Regretfully
    My defeat will only last for a while

    And I fall onto your chest again
    I am just a manikin
    With a synthetic kiss
    So here I stand
    In the presence of your lies
    Tell me angel
    Can you catch me every time
    Or will you just let me...

    Slip away

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    joanlorraine commented on Confound

    03-24-2009

    wow again. I like celebrant better but, this one was really good too. After reading that I was like ... what's next yikes... but, you showed your other side in this one. Nice job
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    Rainz commented on Confound

    03-24-2009

    I see now why your held at such high regard. Powerfull!
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    littleonyx commented on Confound

    03-24-2009

    So there I hang In the balance of your eyes Tell me angel "Can you catch me every time Or will you change your mind" Wow...love it.
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    lightcourier commented on Confound

    03-21-2009

    Nice juxtaposition of realities. Left me wondering the relationship with the manikin(sic).
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    joker88 commented on Confound

    03-18-2009

    I can not see how you said this was cheesy, after all we are our own worst critic. Great poem. "10"
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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