Confusion

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    Confusion

    I've been thinking lately-
    how many lines were for you?
    How many about you?
    Was I thinking about you
    every time I put pen to paper?-
    Was I writing
    what I fear to feel?

    You spoke of beauty-and longing-
    Love letters unsent-
    and promises.

    Did I take it too seriously-
    you said-I love you.

    But I feel it-
    the pain in my stomach-
    Disappointment
    and sorrow.

    Do I want to be Sappho?
    Do I need to be-
    a Muse to a Druid God?

    Because I'm no longer chasing unicorns.
    No longer playing games with Faeries-
    and afraid-
    so afraid.

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    toredbloodink commented on Confusion

    03-14-2017

    No fear in this write.... Do you know God loves humbled pleads ... I read this one knowing I had not read it before.... I have to be honest... I was hoping it wouldn't be as great as the rest... I'm trying to find one I don't see and feel.... Redbloodink

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    LluviaPhoenix’s Poems (19)

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    Reckless Behavior 2
    I Smile for You 4
    I Remember the Days 1
    To Be a Muse 1
    There's No Beauty in the Breakdown 3
    Celtic Background Music 1
    You Told Me It Would Be This Way 2
    Untitled 1
    What Keeps Me Alive 0
    Confused, With My Head Ducked in Laughter 1
    In That Instant 0
    Tattered Perfection 2
    Criticism 1
    Good Ol' Life Experience 0
    Confusion 1
    Words 1
    Standing 0
    Untitled 1