CONFUSION

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    CONFUSION

    When I look at your eyes I see pain… I see anger and confusion

    I wish I could ease your displeasure and let peace come again

    Something got lost in the middle of our love… our friendship

    Something you might not see… is hurting my soul …my heart

     

    Different beings we are now, you give up … I feel powerless

    I don’t know to say in plain words… whatever is within me

    We promised “Our love be devoted and always care for each other

    Through the best and worst”... remember? In time of need even more…

     

    Is midnight …  can’t sleep … my eyes are covered with tears

    Tears afraid of showing when you are looking at my face

    Instead you see angry outburst of unrefined emotions

    Bloody painful emotions stinging like knives my chest

     

    I remember the old days when we use to say “we are different

    …and is because that situation we are together now “

    Like two creeks that ends its sequence and at the end link the river

    Our souls will find no differences …bond as one…  in endless   love

     

    Irresistible  conversations…  good  manners… first class champagne

    Dancing at the stage like lovers  who will never  be  apart

    Those are the days I remember, now everything turn to be  a schedule

    Routine confine our lives crashing us deep inside

     

    Tomorrow… another day , I might pretend nothing happens

    Life, as we agree, will continue, you… going your way… I may too

    Until one way or another … when we might cross on each other

    You might not recognize me… or … I  might not remember you

     

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    mbryant53 commented on CONFUSION

    08-08-2010

    Yes as my friend Dah says much pain comes through in this one.

    dahlusion commented on CONFUSION

    03-10-2010

    So much pain and confusion in this one. Nicely delivered!

    Rhymer commented on CONFUSION

    03-01-2010

    A sad poem about love remembered and love lost. 10 from me.

    Secretdreams

    03/02/2010

    Rhymer, always nice your comments

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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