• Mandi
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there is alwayys some truth in every poem


What has happened to me?

Have I really been set free?

I feel as though I have.

My heart has taken flight!

After blundering through life...

After living through much strife, 

I have found something I don't have!


I probably never will have you.

But you have brought me to...

A precipice in my life...

You have restoreth my soul. 

You have softened my heart of stone.

You have released my attitude so foul.

You have listened to my heart.

I run from you in humiliation...

I hide from you in embarassment...

Yet, I cannot stay away

I can not remain silent.

For  You...

My heart is bursting with emotion.

Please, help me to understand...

What should I be feeling?

Please, tell me where I should land?

Where should this flying heart land?

So high, like the kite that soars high

Over the land, out in the open I stand.

Wearing my heart on my sleeve.

Well, I'll be damned...

I am in love.

Please, take my hand.

So what do you say?

Will you stay?

And, what will I do if you leave?

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ItsHeartBeat commented on Confusion


I wonder...could this be talking about God? I suppose that's a weird question...though. Just wondering.



Like abstract art, some of my poems are best left to the viewer's own interpretqtion.



That's fun. Thank you.

kdarcy commented on Confusion


Love can be confusing in a good way, nice to see you're still writing. Be well, k

StandingBear commented on Confusion


Such a beautifully written poem pertaining to love renewed. Wonderful write.



wonderful subject

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Mandi’s Poems (99)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Heart in Hand 2
Incapacitated 2
Heaven 0
All Alone At The Plate 0
Moon Man 0
Happy Halloween! ! ! 1
Ah,Ha! 1
Sometimes We Should Listen to Friends 1
Destiny 1
undeclared love 1
Search On 1
There's a candle burning bright in my window tonight... 2
The Searcher 3
And 'The World's in Ttheir Hands? 1
When Young Dreams Die 6
The Garden 4
Letting Go 1
Confusion 3
And, So, Life Goes (C'est la Vie) 1
Would you still leave me? 2
Till I Knew You 4
A Good Day 6
A Little White Lie 3
~ ~ Cindy's Garden ~~ 2
The Wheezy, Sneezy Wabbits 2
Into the Azure Blue Sky (original) 1
Ode to a Grecian.... ahh, I mean, to Diet Orange Crush 3
Life Goes On 3
love pending... 1
And then I said.... 1
On The Outside Looking In 3
In One Fell Swoop... 6
A Part of the Crowd 3
That's the Story of My Life 4
I Think I'm Gonna' Write a Book 8
I Am She 7
Acceptance 11
And So.... Let This Be Said! 9
This Is My Kingfdom 7
Darling 7
Rose by the Sea` 7
Into the Azure Blue Sky 22
final act 5
On July 24th, 2010 4
Forsaken? 8
Silence of the Lambs 5
Rise Up From Slumber 10
Conversion 3
Shades of Kevin 8
hello out there.... 12
Now If That Ain't Love, I Don't Know What Is! 7
The Man Who Kept the Law 9
Tell Me Little Baby what do you see? 9
My Last Everything 17
In The Pink 14
Making the Cut 8
Letter To An Unnamed Lover 7
Where the Trolls Live 11
Three Little Girls and the Witch's Tower 9
Sunrise of Life 4
Is Anyone Like Me? 11
Waiting 8
Beautiful Bella 4
A Place in the World 4
Friend 4
Welcome to the Family 2
Devotion 2
Reflections 6
Just One of Those Days 3
Mother 1
Destiny 1
Dreamland 1
Grandaughters 4
The Prairie Highway 4
Play Ball? 4
When Day is Done 4
When Peonies Last Bloomed in the Garden 2
Longing 4
On Angel's Wings 3
Frustration 2
I Am Too Smart 1
Too Late 3
bon jour 1
Limerick for a Cop 2
The Gift 5
Heaven's Tide 2
I Remember You, Dad 6
The Girl and the Lonely Heart / Romancing the Girl 4
The Third Street Bridge 1
Missing Little Things 1
Secrets 6
Eden 6
Crying Babies 3
Game of Life 3