contained

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    contained

    I have been contained,
    Contained by a male driven society.
    My legs have been crossed shut with propriety as an excuse.
    My mind erased, reprogrammed, filled with empty thoughts.
    Told that my virtue will lure them in,
    Until it is stolen and I am left as nothing.
    Taught by mother to compose myself,
    To have a soft femininity and a tamed sexuality.
    Taught to be a lady,
    By her mother as well.
    Although they pass the instruction manual down,
    They did not create it.
    Men created my way of being as well as hers.
    I am not a woman,
    But merely these ideals and fantasies meshed together created by men.
    Restricted in from what I eat to what I wear,
    Told what to think.
    It never ends,
    Only changing by asking men permission.
    They'll never allow us to be equal,
    For we were born with a gapping hole, a wound that's forever left unhealed.
    I have been contained,
    WE HAVE BEEN CONTAINED.
    Locked up,
    Lacking a flat chest and a set of balls.
    I have been created by men.

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    redbloodink commented on contained

    04-18-2010

    You showed such "CONTAINED" emotion here.......... Restricted in from what I eat to what I wear, Told what to think. It never ends, Only changing by asking men permission. They'll never allow us to be equal, For we were born with a gapping hole, a wound that's forever left unhealed. I have been contained, WE HAVE BEEN CONTAINED. Locked up, Lacking a flat chest and a set of balls. I have been created by men....... I felt this whole piece that I just quoted...,From this powerful write I can truly say that I am touched deeply since I do have balls.......... gotta love it.... red

    ginga commented on contained

    08-21-2009

    chalkout, A superbly written poem with a message that pierces. ginga

    Mangus commented on contained

    07-25-2009

    interesting piece, well stated..Do you feel better?

    Lunesca commented on contained

    07-12-2009

    wow!!! why is it that men are the higher powered of the two sexes? they make us women feel inferior and then wonder why we hate them so...look in the mirror and you will see, men, you are not better than me

    CdeM commented on contained

    07-10-2009

    rise up oh powerful one, because it isn't gender that creates power, societal more, or even status... It's action, it's freedom of will it is your absolution. One may only witness in full brevity their plight when they disregard the rules of others... Wel composed, but more importantly well thought, I hope you do this poem justice in your daily life...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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