Contemplating Winter

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    • Papa
    • Sitting, waiting on the world to turn

    Contemplating Winter

    I'm sitting here just thinking,
    what has become of me.
    Fifty years of dust trails,
    and lots of trampled leaves.
    Scars and stains from side walk cracks,
    that decorate my skin.
    The worn out heels on all of my shoes,
    that I'm still just breaking in.
    Fifty pairs of Levis,
    that help me take in stride,
    the road of life that I've been down,
    not along for just the ride.
    I'm on the downhill road they say,
    It should be easy still,
    but there's still one mountain I must climb,
    but sometimes I lack the will.
    Looking back, I look ahead,
    as I embrace my fall.
    Winter's closing in on me,
    did I really live at all?

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    gmcookie commented on Contemplating Winter

    10-20-2010

    My answer to that question would be yes. If you have ever loved, if you have ever felt passionate about anything, if you have ever created something, then you have lived. This is a really nice polished write my friend. You get a 10 from me. And if you want to read a humorous version of the same meditation you might check this one out: http://www.originalpoetry.com/time-is-a-brutal-mistress

    gogant commented on Contemplating Winter

    07-22-2010

    Hey Papa, when one stops to contemplate, the world, and the ladies, pass you by.............I like this kind of poetry, for sure.....

    stellar commented on Contemplating Winter

    07-14-2010

    your poems are addicting..save this to my favs....................^_^ v

    Teardrops commented on Contemplating Winter

    07-08-2010

    Look at your grandson and see you in his eyes . Yes you lived and you will be remembered . Great poem Marie

    stefy commented on Contemplating Winter

    07-08-2010

    A wonderful poem!!!.....really contemplating..........................

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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