Could Be Me

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    Could Be Me

    So the day finally came

    You left her behind,

    You never took another glance

    She never crossed you mind.

    Leaving her was easy

    It's plainly clear to see,

    I come to finally realize

    It easily could be me.

    Your heart, it says I love you

    Sometimes I do believe,

    I've learned it all the hard way

    You heart, it will deceive.

    The one way you can show me

    Is with actions that you do,

    To prove to me you love me

    And your love is really true.

    For it could be me………..

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    ScottishBard commented on Could Be Me

    11-09-2009

    I like this one. Remind me of love I had to leave behind.
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    Shadowwalker

    11/14/2009

    I am so glad you like this one. Shadowwalker

    Rendida commented on Could Be Me

    08-07-2009

    I was touched by this poem... it says so much about possible love... great write
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    Shadowwalker

    08/10/2009

    TY so much

    claytonbruster commented on Could Be Me

    05-31-2009

    Totally outstanding work again love. I'm so glad you have shared this site with me. It gives me insight and allows me the privilege of seeing your work. Kudos.
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    Shadowwalker

    05/31/2009

    I share with you what you have shared with me.........Kudos to you

    GentleT commented on Could Be Me

    05-31-2009

    It could be you for the afore mention person has shown a deceitful heart and a weak characteristic. Wise and written well.
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    Shadowwalker

    05/31/2009

    That is what this is all about and it could have been me if I had not seen

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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