Counting on Second Chances

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    • Lioness4life
    • I am down but seeking myself and going thru my own rehab to be happy again!

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    Hi guys, I dont want ya 2 get scared by this poem. I will not kill myself but this r my feelings!  I wrote this poem to share my heart and to heal a lil bit and i hope this poem can reach other people and let them see its okay 2 be raw but they r still other options all we got to do is come together and work on it! ya r my freinds cuz i believe we all have something in common cuz we all are artist and we share our words and they can help people and also pack a powerful punch! i am thankful 4 ya cuz i feel like i am sharing my words and i hope God see's me thru so i can accomplish all my goals and be whole one day. so know i am here 4 ya 2 so i love 2 add on and make freinds on here and build relationships. so thanks for taking out time to read the words from my heart but i fell like ya r listening and ya hear me even though i am not speaking. so Thank U .
    Mwaa
    God Bless Ya!
    ~Lioness4life~

    Counting on Second Chances

     My life is full of a whole bunch of dark shadows , creeping on me
    This big demonic, deadly shadow called depression nearly took me down
    Then i got blind and didn't see my hopes and dreams anymore
    I dropped out of college and lost my job
    then it was pretty easy to crawl into a ball
    couldnt get out of bed
    the sun didn't shine for me
    so i had in bed under my comforters
    where i found comfort and security
    but i really was burying the pain
    and i couldnt change my ways
    I was so down like an addict and i only i believed i was sick
    i had so many bad moments
    it was the breakdowns that were the worst
    What do u do when there is a strong peice of pain weighing u down
    sitting right on ur chest
    do u keep fighting or end ur pain
    i need an answer cuz i cant handle all these things
    suicide attempts are only a release a negative way out
    but how much can a girl hold out
    fighting a losing battle is getting pretty sick
    all i do to heal from it is get some dick
    we all know thats no solution to this problem
     but i am not sure how to solve it
    but i do know God has given me second chances
    I just need to get better and take it
    going back to school
    have my family somewhat back
    got a good man by my side
    but my second chances r blowing up in my face
    only school is going right
    so ya put out a prayer for a women in need
    maybe alway ur voices can save me
    Mwaa

    ~Lioness4life~

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    Rhymer commented on Counting on Second Chances

    04-10-2010

    The first line grabbed me, my life has been full of dark shadows. Your read expresses so much emotion of the dark and depressive state 10 from me.
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