Cracked

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  • Confusion

    Cracked


    Bottomless bowl slowly leaking it's self control.
    The cracks sneaking up like a creeper drug.
    Once a solid piece, weakens with every social blow
    and there is no where else to go.
    Can we not ever be healed?,
    or are we just all meant to break?...

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    Viper89 commented on Cracked

    05-25-2011

    Break I say! It just makes life so much more poetic don't you think! Great Poem!!!

    kage commented on Cracked

    02-09-2010

    good work and a great story . the words are good and they flow well i like this just a great poem

    ArizonaPlay

    02/09/2010

    thank you very much kage ^_^

    soulwriter commented on Cracked

    11-23-2009

    Ah, I've been away from the site and upon my return a discover new talent... WRITE ON!

    gypsyf8 commented on Cracked

    11-01-2009

    another excellent piece . .. . . i so enjoy reading and feeling your writings!!!

    Artie commented on Cracked

    10-18-2009

    The depth of this is amazing!!!! I really like this. So much said with so little, is always impressive - 10 +++ from me

    ArizonaPlay

    10/18/2009

    thank you for your comments

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Named Price 6
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    Cold 5
    Puppet 5
    Listen 5
    Ego 7
    I quote 5
    Cycled 7
    ~*~Comin Home ~*~ 3
    Our Norm 2
    Numb 6
    mixed 2
    Father 4
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    Hold me close 7
    Pictures 5