CrAcKeD

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The Black Knight Attacks Once Again ...

CrAcKeD

Here it is ... another day,
Somewhere lost along the way.
Lost in madness - confusion's maze,
Trapped in tommorow's yesterdays.
~~~
Seems like heaven - feels like hell,
Caught in the madness of it's spell.
Lost in a realm of deep depression,
Residing in my dark obsession.
~~~
Escaping reality's pains of the past,
Insanity creeps in and moves in fast.
Standing tall and fighting to survive,
A never ending battle to stay alive.
~~~
I must not let him control my life,
But it's hard to deny the Black Knight.
I must not let him take what remains,
He's the master of confusion's game.
~~~
He'll drag me in deep and trap my soul,
This is his mission - his only goal.
If I allow him to - he won't let me back,
He'll trap me in hell - until I've cracked.
~~~
I can't allow him to complete his task,
The White Knight must fend off his attack.
Relentless he can be ... So I must stand tall,
And not give in to his demonic call.
~~~
So..
Here it is ... another day,
Somewhere lost along the way.
Lost in madness - confusion's maze,
Trapped in tommorow's yesterdays.

~~ CrAcKeD ~~

~~~

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Ming commented on CrAcKeD

12-12-2010

Been there . . . I think most of us have at one time or other have visited. This is an exceptional write depicting fear, and a myriad of other deep seated unexplored psychoses/neuroses, truths, realities, cause and effect. I love poetry like this, poetry, that explores self and circumstance, poetry that makes me think, and question existence "Is this all Real . ?" . Well done my friend. -Ming

knight4696

12/15/2010

Hey Ming! :) Nice to see you my friend! I write stuff like this to help myself internalize. It helps me to get through the tough times. I'm happy you are able to identify with this piece. Thanks again Pal! :) Ken

Artie commented on CrAcKeD

11-12-2010

I think all of us at some point in life get the feeling that we are just "existing" instead of living. The days just seem to slip by secondary to all the crap we gotta sift to. Just don't let these times take from you, the things that make you. I'm not sure if that's the underlying message you wanted to convey here, but it's what I got. 10 from me

knight4696

11/15/2010

Hey Vamp! :) Thanks again Pal for the fly by. lol! :) And as usual .. your dead on with the message I was trying to convey. Thanks again Pal! Talk to ya soon. :) Ken

stefy commented on CrAcKeD

11-12-2010

Such a deep depiction of inner feelings.........an amazing poem:)

knight4696

11/15/2010

Thanks so much Stefy! :) I appreciate the read and praise. Thanks again! :) Ken

Kanicki commented on CrAcKeD

11-09-2010

What a Knight with an excellent write, Bravo!! I agree with Olan - the line "Trapped in tomorrow's yesterdays" Wow! 10+ Peace, Light and Love

knight4696

11/09/2010

Thank you once again Kanicki! :) I'm so happy you enjoy my twisted tales. :) Thanks again for all the reads and comments. Much appreciated! :) Ken

Olan01 commented on CrAcKeD

11-09-2010

Trapped in tomorrow's yesterdays... is very clever and so true as time is all the same; there is only how. Olan.

knight4696

11/09/2010

Thanks again Olan! :) You are correct sir .. All there is .. is now. All that matters is how we live for today. Thanks again pal! :) Ken

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