Creating Women

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    a forced peice of work that we did as an exercise at a conference I attended years ago called "Creating Women"

    Creating Women

    Hear our voices speak with strength
    giving value to the way we think
    view the things our hands create
    see the beauty and appreciate

    A mother's words, a sister's smile
    the way they make us feel worthwhile
    our friendships have a lasting touch
    teaching as we share so much

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    JLorian commented on Creating Women

    06-21-2010

    This is almost a female empowerment chant. You are very articulate.

    vincenzo commented on Creating Women

    05-25-2010

    brevity is your watchword. i liked it though except that the rhyme in first stanza did not seem to flow...

    ListninEar

    05/25/2010

    thanks, I'll look at that

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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